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Here's another commission! This is djunk855's character Atur (her name is longer but I'm not brave enough to spell it out). This is a character he designed for a story he's writing so please let him (me) know what you think of the design! And of course, as always, let me know how I did! Thanks XD
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djunk855 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 5, 2016
Told you this would get more views in a day than the copy on my profile has in the entire time it has been posted : P
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nextARTIST Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Haha I thought it might
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djunk855 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2016
It seems the views on Atur and Setsuko in my gallery have finally surpassed those on yours : P
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nextARTIST Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Really? Hmm
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djunk855 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2016
Yep, yours are in the early 300's, mine are in the early 400's. I think it's because my story is starting to have a larger readership. I'm up to over 1300 faves and over 1600 follows.
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nextARTIST Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2016  Student Digital Artist
On the story site? That's great to hear
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LauriceDeauxnim Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Nice work on Atur, I like her design. She looks pretty awesome in my opinion. :) (Smile) 
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nextARTIST Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! I'm sure djunk will appreciate that
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djunk855 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 4, 2016
Thanks :) Of the characters I've created, she's one of the one's I'm most proud of. I made her for a fanfic I'm planning out that I went a little crazy with the OC creation. She's just one of 30 monster girls I made for it. I based her design on the FFX version of Ifrit.
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Ablox Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016
That mesh "armor" doesn't leave much to the imagination, but hey I ain't complaining.
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nextARTIST Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Student Digital Artist
It certainly does not ;)
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djunk855 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 4, 2016
It's actually chain mail. She's a fire elemental and when she gets angry or pumped up the hair on her body turns into flames, so most normal clothing is risky to wear. Instead, she owns a variety of chain mail clothing, some of which covers much more than this, but this her favorite/default.
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DLeagueman Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
she looks cute nice job
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nextARTIST Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Thanks!
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daritha42 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Not bad. Only one thing I feel a need to point out; her hips & shoulder ratio. I know you like drawing such ladies, but this one (especialy with her normaly looking sizes :D ) looks like if you scaled her up bellow the waist. But otherwise good job, really.
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nextARTIST Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Fight me bro!! Aha just kidding. Yes I did give her wide hips, but who would complain about that ;)
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daritha42 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
:) Haha. Yes, who would. Well, I do preffer tiny cute girls, but I am not that picky =P
Which takes me to a question I wanted to ask; would you mind drawing my OC someday? I wonder how would that look :thinker: 
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nextARTIST Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2016  Student Digital Artist
While I wouldn't mind, there are many other things that I have an obligation to finish first. If I do somehow have enough time I could try, but this is nowhere near a guarantee.
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daritha42 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I wouldn't expect anything else :) It is just an idea in case you didn't know what to do ;)
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djunk855 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 4, 2016
Don't you remember, I did way back : P ;) lol
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nextARTIST Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Lol yeah I know :p
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djunk855 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 4, 2016
I thought the hips were still a little too big, to be honest. I also specifically asked that her shoulders be a bit wider, which may be why they look that way to you. I designed her to be a bit more lithe and have somewhat revealing clothing to act as an opposite to Setsuko's more voluptuous figure and conservative outfits. The picture isn't meant to be sexy, just show what she looks like.
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KidKaiserX Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Reminds me of Rinkah from Fire Emblem Fates, i don't think you had heard of her Next
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nextARTIST Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Yeah I've never played a fire emblem game so I don't know. The character is supposedly designed after something from Final Fantasy though
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KidKaiserX Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, if you don't know what rinkah looks like, then check this out s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/7…
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nextARTIST Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Oh I actually do know who that is. I don't see the resemblance though
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KidKaiserX Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, hmm
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djunk855 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 4, 2016
Yay, finally! Since it wasn't in the description, I'll put it here. Atur is short for Aturdokht, which is Persian for "Daughter of Fire", and is a fire elemental monster girl. I designed her to be a foil to a character I'm going to commission another picture from nextARTIST for, a Yuki Onna (snow woman) named Setsuko (means "snow child"). I based her design off the FFX version of Ifrit and Setsuko's design I based on the general design of Shiva in the Final Fantasy series.

Also, bring on the criticism/input. I really want to know what you think about the design choices I made. Please try to be specific if you can.
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S3rb4n Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really neat! Wonderful job!
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nextARTIST Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Thank you oh buddy of mine
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S3rb4n Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome, oh buddy of mine!
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